2012年雅思写作范文:Scientific Research

发布时间:2013-09-03 14:06:39 来源:宁波朗阁培训中心 编辑:宁波朗阁小编
  在雅思写作中,考生需要注意一定的写作方法。常见的作文就是有个观点,然后用于支持这个观点的理由就一个,来回来去的说,写来写去,看...


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  在雅思写作中,考生需要注意一定的写作方法。常见的作文就是有个观点,然后用于支持这个观点的理由就一个,来回来去的说,写来写去,看着是写了一大篇,其实都是对一个理由的重复,这样虽然你的字数不少,但是对于读者来说,和写一个主体段,一个理由没有什么区别。

  下面,我们通过一个雅思写作范文:Scientific Research来去解下雅思作文写作中要注意的事项:

  Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  As can be argued, government rules can easily become obstacles to scientific achievements. Usually, most of the world's headline-making scientific discoveries do not come through governmental establishments, admitting that fiscal funding is often essential to helping such success to happen in the private sector. It is false to suggest that the government should carry out and control scientific research because the issue is not only about money but also brains.

  Just because public funds matter, it does not follow that the government should restrict that kind of freedom of thinking which is vital to imaginative minds. Apart from that, nothing is more naive than for the government to play the role of police and rule research activities. Yes, freedom--that is how scientific breakthroughs are born. It goes without saying that probably billions of government's money may be needed to carry out research projects in various scientific fields, but it must be considered that great scientists tend to ignore, or even go against the rules. Indeed, it is hard to imagine how many scientific discoveries could have been missed as a result of unnecessary regulations. To put it strongly, control is the death of scientific research.

  Scientific research should not be forced in any event. It is because a research problem is less likely to be solved by any apparatus which money can buy than to be solved by the brains of a free head that money cannot always buy. Thus, it does not seem proper for official amateurs to "know" what on earth scientists are doing. Otherwise, it would not be called "research" in the real sense of the word. Trying to heavily monitor scientific brains is perhaps a dangerous attitude since the consequence is always too much foliage and too little fruit. That can explain in part why the government ought to shift most of the pledged fiscal spending from the public to the private sector.

  All aspects taken into account, scientific research is two things: billions and brains. With little doubt, the success in a country's scientific discoveries relies on both sufficient funding from the government and on creative minds from private companies in which pure research is worth every penny it costs. All the government has to do is grant money and expect that somewhere, something incredible is going to be known. (Created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh)

  在雅思写作中,经常听到老师说,写作和口语用词要特别。其实这是没错的,但是很多同学却误解这句话的意思,认为用词特别就是用一些长词,少见的词。于是,经常在学生的作文里看到一些可笑的英语中很古老的词,或者是在很学术性的文章中才会用到的词。有的同学直接从字典里找到一个单词的同义词,然后从那些同义词里挑一个自己没怎么听说过的,写在作文中,还觉得自己特别牛。有一个同学,写自己讨厌英语用了abhor,虽然是近义词,但是abhor却只很惊恐,很讨厌的意思。有一个中国同学,每次交作文第2稿的时候总是抱怨写作中心的老师把他作文中的大词全都改了。他用了很多大词,难词,但是没有一个是用正确的。老师问他都认识这些词吗,他说不认识,都是从字典里挑的。

  用词要恰到好处,有意识的让自己用词多样化是很好的,但是要注意用的词的具体用法,就是说查到这个单词的时候要再查查这个单词的例句,看看能不能在自己的作文中类似的情况下使用。有时候一查字典就可以看到,有些词标识着formal,证明是很正式的词,有些词就说明了是outdated, rarelyused, 之类的。有个同学说英语的时候总是用一些GRE的词汇,每次他和人说话,大家都觉得他说的非常可笑,一点也没觉得他英语好。相反,有的同学用的词都很普通,但是表达的意思比较准确,所以大家都觉得说的比较地道些。那么,怎么解决自己用词重复,或者经常用简单词的问题呢?那需要你拿一点时间专门来总结些同义词,学习一下这些词的用法,这样,了解了用法再去使用,就不会很怪异。比如说,想表达喜欢一件事情,你要总结出:be fond of, be interested in, be keen on, be fascinated by, sth appeals to me a lot,等等,很多表达方式。在练习写作的时候刻意的多换些词使用,今后写的时候就会自然想到这些词。因此,一句话来说,用词要特别,更要准确。


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