常见的雅思教育类英语话题作文分析

发布时间:2013-09-18 11:57:13 来源:宁波朗阁培训中心 编辑:宁波朗阁小编
  在雅思写作中,学术类小作文共有好几种图形,在考试中一般是以数据图为主,包括线形图,饼状图,柱形图,以及表格。顾名思义,这几种图...

  在雅思写作中,学术类小作文共有好几种图形,在考试中一般是以数据图为主,包括线形图,饼状图,柱形图,以及表格。顾名思义,这几种图形都是以数据为主要信息。 图形的种类繁多,大多数考生都会将每种图独立起来,单独地分析其特征,这就需要记下许多繁琐的信息。事实上数据图没有我们想象的那么复杂,只要抓住规律,很快就能掌握小作文的写作方法了。

  雅思写作的评分标准不象四六级或托福采用整体式的评分,而是分项式评分(analytical scoring)。也就是说,考官给考生并不只打一个分数,而是根据具体的评分细则分项给分。

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  下面,宁波朗阁小编为大家整理了雅思教育类话题作文的写作,大家可以参考下!

  1.Nowadays, international tourism is a multibillion dollar industry that supports economic development, but some people think it causes damage to local environment and culture. What is your opinion?

  2. People think that the news media have influenced people’s lives nowadays, which is a negative development of the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  3. Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away ”culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. What are possible reasons and what measures can you recommend resolving this problem?

  4. Modern buildings are changing the appearance of cities and towns,but some people argue we should build all buildings in traditional styles to protect the cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  5.As the modern science and technology develops, some aspects of traditional culture are being lost, so some people think that the traditional culture and technology will be replaced by the modern science and technology such as computer and internet. What is your opinion?

  有些人觉得老师应当只关注(focus on)学术科目,这是老师的基本职责(fundamental responsibility),比如幼儿园(nursery school)和小学的识字、算术、美术、音乐、体育;中学的外语、物理、化学、自然、生物、历史、地理;大学的各种专业知识(specialist knowledge)。但学生和老师相处时间长,除了学习学术科目,在为人处世方面也会潜移默化(unconsciously)地受老师影响(influence)。

  所以,我认为老师也有责任教学生如何判断对错和行为得体,比如守时(punctual)是好习惯,而浪费是坏习惯;应当重视家庭,尊重长辈;应当相信工作,相信人,相信神(believe the God,西方人常见世界观之一)。这些做人方面的内容(How to be a qualified citizen)对学生在未来职业的帮助甚至超过专业知识。虽然孩子们也能从家长处或媒体上学到相关内容,但老师通常是主体。

  教师不仅应关注学术科目,还有责任教学生判断对错和行为得体。

  2)061014:

  Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  翻译:教孩子如何做好公民而不是对孩子有益

  有些人人为学校的主要目的是教学生做一个好市民或好工人而不是对学生个体有益,你在多大程度上同意或反对?

  下面,宁波朗阁小编为大家整理雅思5段式例文(一边倒),大家可以参考下

  People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university?

  People attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.(41words)

  Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.(62 words)

  Also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. This often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. For most students, going to college is the first time they have been away form home by themselves. In addition, this is the first time they have had to make decisions on their own. Making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.(68 words)

  Besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. For many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that does not relate to their career.(43 words)

  I would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. Instead, they should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in. This may make them better prepared for their future.(41 words)

  这篇是5段式的写法,而且属于一边倒,并非两边都讨论,思路很清晰,语言也很简练并且很值得模仿!!! 8分绝对有。


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