雅思英语写作补习范例分析

发布时间:2013-09-10 17:48:12 来源:宁波朗阁培训中心 编辑:宁波朗阁小编
  雅思写作考试大都属于历年雅思考试中常见的几大类话题,如教育类、犯罪类、文化类和政府责任类等。甚至有几道考题几乎是过去考题的翻版...

 

  雅思写作考试大都属于历年雅思考试中常见的几大类话题,如教育类、犯罪类、文化类和政府责任类等。甚至有几道考题几乎是过去考题的翻版:

  其实出现这样的考题(话题)重复现象也不奇怪,因为雅思考试经历了一段时间的发展,写作考题已经出现过三百多个不同版本了,基本上已经涵盖了所有的“contemporary topics of general interest”,也就是雅思考试写作的出题范围。SABRINA建议考生应该注意思考历年考题,并积累相应的辩论思路。

  雅思的写作要遵循三步走

  如何在雅思写作考试中获得较高的分数呢?雅思培训专家也就此给出了以下建议:审题是雅思写作的第一步,审题的准确与否直接影响到评分标准中的第一条“Task Response”。

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  转化思维是第二步:中国考生受中式思维的影响,用英语文字表达汉语思想,使得不了解中国文化的外国人读后完全不明白考生的意思。在写作中应该注意把思维转化过来,多引用地道的英语表达方式,增加文章的亮点。

  适当背诵套句和范文是第三步:通过此方法可以培养英语思维习惯、提高逻辑思维能力,理解不同语境下词汇和句子结构的区别,但也要避免过度使用造成文章的千篇一律。

  下面,杭州朗阁小编为大家整理了雅思范文写作辅导,大家可以参考下!

  Generally speaking, there has been a gap in the standard of living between cities and rural areas.And in China, the problem is seriously obvious in every corner of social life. Several contributing factors can be identified. In the following, I would like to present my point of view.

  Although China’s economy is developing very fast, the keystone is the policy in many eastern big cities. For example, the city of Shenzhen grew quickly several years before, because its policy is widely open and the government expended great effort to help it develop. The development of Beijing and Shanghai is almost the same. But in rural areas, the policy is not that advanced. What the state cares most is the production of food, since China has a huge population. As a result, the progress of rural areas is much slower than that in cities.

  In addition, the attitude of people in the countryside is greatly different from that of people in cities. The feudal influence in countryside is apparently continuing. People there are still doing everything in traditional manners, many of which are badly impeding their improvement. By contrast, people living in cities have given up many outmoded customs, and worked out some new cultures, which makes their living style more compatible with the progress of the society.

  Moreover, many former farm laborers have rushed into cities in order to earn more money, which makes the supply of farmers sharply inadequate. As a result, people there have to give birth to more children, which causes a vicious circle in that the more they breed, the poorer they live.

  However, Chinese government has already noticed this problem, and is trying to establish some means to solve it.The way I think most efficient is to pay more attention to the science and technique in agriculture, and free part of the farmers to other occupations. And we also need to go inside the country-side, and bring them the most advanced ideas and cultures. Following this way, our society must develop faster, steadier and more balanced.


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