雅思作文教育类范文的技巧分析

发布时间:2013-09-02 16:07:24 来源:宁波朗阁培训中心 编辑:宁波朗阁小编
  雅思写作部分的考试是雅思笔试部分的最后一环,在经历了前面的听力与阅读战斗之后,考生整体的英语思维达到了较好的状态。但是在雅思写...

  雅思写作部分的考试是雅思笔试部分的最后一环,在经历了前面的听力与阅读战斗之后,考生整体的英语思维达到了较好的状态。但是在雅思写作的这个阶段,考生们需要保持思路清晰!

  在雅思写作中,考生们需要注意以下几点去整合自己的文章:

  1、章的深度

  每篇文章你只有30分钟,这么短的时间内你不可能覆盖每一个推理,反驳和例子。当你开始考试时,抽出几分钟的时间确定要写的论点和例子。你不必包含每个论题和概念。大部分学生都没有足够的时间覆盖他想覆盖的内容。所以,只要选择其中最具说服力的点和例子。其实,判分者也不期望你对每个论题都作深入的探讨。

  这里最重要的是你的作文不要离题。抓住要点。不要扯远了也不要过分集中在某个例子上。

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  2、例子从何而来

  题目会告诉你可以利用自己的经历来展开你的论点,得出结论。这种方法是可以的,但不要过分。你的推理依据应该更偏向于所学到的知识而非个人经历。你所举的例子或者知识可能很吸引人,但不要试图深入。因为托福作文测试的是你基本写作能力,而非你的专业知识。留学生:尽量多读一些美国杂志,以适应美国人写作的习惯和跟上时代的潮流。

  3、保持简洁

  试着将自己放在评分者的位置上,他们整天在为作文判分。你希望看到一篇包含5段每段4句的简洁的有效的文章还是4段每段10句的散漫的文章呢?简而言之:确保你的作文干脆,简洁能取悦评分者。在Issue部分这尤其重要,因为在这里你表达的是你自己的观点。

  雅思写作范文—教育类的话题分析:

  Most countries spend lots of money on education as they start to recognize its importance. In your opinion which two following subjects are the most important for your people and which one is the least important?

  Subject:

  Literature Sports

  Mathematics Economy

  Physics History

  Music Geography

  It has been said that investing in education is investing in one’s future: this is true for both individuals and nations. It is always somewhat subjective to say which is more important, the humanities or sciences, as both have value. However, I would like to make a case for the importance of math and economics in this day and age.

  Let us begin with math. Mathematics is a foundation subject which bridges many different fields, from physics and chemistry to the Internet and modern medicine. All of our material advances in the 20th century could not have happened without advanced mathematics. To be sure, it will also play a critical role in meeting challenges like global warming and space travel, to name just a few, in the future.

  【范文点评】写作观点:数学、经济学重要,地理不重要。所以文章中间三段分别讨论三个学科。

  这篇文章题型少见,题目内容对中国考生来说比较另类。说明哪个学科的重要性不难,难的是说明一个学科为什么不重要,还注意到题目中有最高级词汇:the most important, the least important。

  我们受到的教育是行业没有三六九等,行行出状元。如果在小学课堂上讨论此类题目,有小朋友胆敢说地理最不重要,老师一定会发飙:“胡说,不要有偏见,各个学科都重要,人类都需要,缺一不可。”于是大家考试不能偏科,长大之后都没有了“偏见”。

  而这篇文章就是逼着你写出偏见,让你偏科,还很极端,因为题目中有最高级。

  所以我最欣赏的是在本文首段第二句话,在表达个人偏见前的让步:It is always somewhat subjective(主观的) to say which is more important, the humanities(人文学科) or sciences, as both have value. 这句话我相信也是大多数考生看完题目后的第一感觉,但表达不出来。

  下面,宁波朗阁为大家整理了雅思写作的范文:教育,大家可以参考一下。

  It is generally believed that education is of vital importance in individuals' development and well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? Both individuals and societies benefit from education. For individuals, the potential benefits lie in general quality of life and in the economic returns of sustained, satisfying employment. For societies, the potential benefits lie in economic growth and the development of shared values that underpin social cohesion.

  Societies make substantial investments from both public and private sources in education, both formal provisions and informal provisions in the community and the workplace. It is important to ensure that the education programmes they support are effective and efficient and that the benefits are distributed equitably.

  Work on education at those non-profit organisations seeks to develop and review policies to enhance the efficiency and the effectiveness of education provisions and the equity with which their benefits are shared. Strategies include thematic reviews in specific policy areas, and collecting detailed statistical information on education systems, including measures of the competence levels of individuals. For example, the policies addressed include those implemented within countries for national benefit and those involved in the provision by countries of development aid to build capacity and to spread the benefits of education and training in other countries; the Programme on Educational Building promotes the exchange and analysis of policy, research and experience in all matters related to educational building. Its work is of relevance to policy-makers in national and regional authorities responsible for educational facilities, to architects, to system level and institutional managers, and to researchers in the field.

  To sum up, promoting educational equity is a longstanding goal and key for social inclusion. Although educational levels have improved steadily, learning opportunities remain unevenly distributed. Fighting the disadvantages related to socio-economic, community, gender, ethnic, and other background runs through most education work.

  此外,在雅思小作文中,考生们需要注意:在大约是10点50左右,写作考试会开始。写作的答题纸是白色的,而试卷是浅灰色的(很沉重的色彩)。写作的时间也是60分钟。考官会在过去20分钟后提示一次,因为这时你应该完成了小作文。但其实根据中国考生的经验,不一定那么死板地按照这个时间规定做的,大作文只要有感觉,30-35分钟足够的,恰恰是小作文要重视,一切的规律和趋势一定要写完整。

  雅思作文答题纸使用的一个核心原则就是保持卷面整洁与清晰。雅思考试写有作文题目的那张卷子的空白处是可以做草稿纸用的,但是作文答题纸的空白处不可以随便写字、勾画,以防作弊。雅思笔试的铅笔是可以置换笔芯的(俗称:下蛋笔),如果写作中途觉得笔芯太粗,想置换新一个的话,可以将新的笔芯在题目卷子上快速划一划,磨一磨,毕竟笔尖太细的话有点不好用。笔试配置的橡皮很多人反映不是很好用,如果听力和阅读部分没有用橡皮的话,可以在发写作卷子之前的空档将橡皮在桌子上擦一擦,以便使用时不会因橡皮表面过于光滑而擦黑卷子。当然,这一细节可以放到考听力部分之前完成。答卷时如果有个别单词拼写错误,可以只在错误单词上划一条线,以减少用橡皮擦的时间。


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