雅思写作七分的备考经验技巧

发布时间:2013-09-02 14:44:46 来源:宁波朗阁培训中心 编辑:宁波朗阁小编
  雅思写作是对考生词汇和句型以及一些技巧的综合考验,写好雅思作文对于雅思的总分也是比较重要的。很多雅思专家指出,要考一个比较好的...

  雅思写作是对考生词汇和句型以及一些技巧的综合考验,写好雅思作文对于雅思的总分也是比较重要的。很多雅思专家指出,要考一个比较好的海外名校,雅思写作部分的成绩最好是7分!

  要想在2013年申请英国排名前十的高校,雅思总分至少需达到7.5分。这一新趋势对广大中国考生形成了不小的压力,如果目标总分为7.5,听力和阅读必须保证8分及以上,而口语和写作均不能低于6.5,甚至要拿到7分才算保险。

  在写雅思作文的时候,摸清考官的口味固然重要,但最关键的还是要通过学习和积累逐步培养自己的思维能力和写作技巧,才能从容应对变化多端的考题。大量的阅读输入和适量的写作练习可以为集中备考打好基础。

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  宁波朗阁为大家整理了一个雅思作文7分的考生的经验,大家可以参考下:

  我是今年五月考的IELTS,写作7分,现在我来谈谈我的写作经验。

  1、注重写好文章的框架

  我曾经问过我的外教老师, 外国人看文章最注重的是什么, 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好, 首先看的不是他的句型, 词汇, 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚,我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头,经过, 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词, 例如:first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段, 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章, 看看他们的写作模式, 我当初写文章的时候, 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式,我觉得可以套用, 我最后介绍给大家。

  2、句型的多样化

  如果一篇文章, 从头到尾, 永远用的只有一种句型, 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分,我们可以适当的改换一下句型, 我给大家一定建议,希望给大家有点帮助。

  3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ.主谓句;Ⅱ. There be;Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子;Ⅳ. 被动语态(我看到一张帖字说, 不要用被动, 我不这样认为, 国外的文章, 用被动的也比比皆是。)

  4、复杂句型  包括 Ⅰ. 并列句;Ⅱ. 从句(定语,状语,名词性,非谓语)

  5.词汇的Variety

  说实话做到这点真的很难, 首先你要有庞大的词汇量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。我自认做不到这点,所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,例如:激烈的竞争 fierce competition等

  6、多举EXAMPLE(重要)

  大家不要小看这点, 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说, 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理, 你有这么多话要说吗?而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友, 可以说她的英语基础很差, 但她的文章也拿了6分, 我问她怎么写的, 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过我的外教老师, 他曾是IELTS的考官, 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。

  这边,宁波朗阁为大家整理了一个雅思写作的范文,这个考生的得分是7分,范文仅供参考,切不可背诵。

  More and more women go out to work. It is responsibility of government to provide staff and facilities for children of working mother, free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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  After a long, bitter struggle, women now enjoy the same educational opportunities as men in most parts of the world. More and more educated women go out to work after graduation. The achievement they have made in almost every field is spectacular. But no matter which kind of occupation they go into or how hard those works are most of them at the same time are engaged with another laborsome work, that is, bearing and rearing children. All of these things could have put men to shame who cling to their supremacy and always moan about the work pressure. However they are quietly sitting back and letting it happen.

  It is about time the government done something about it. Many sociologists present their views on this issue and give a lot of practical advice. The most practical one among them, from my point of view, is to provide staff and facilities for children of working mother by government, free of charge.

  There are at least two obvious advantages of this policy. First of all, it will disengage women from the time consuming work of rearing and educating children and give them a chance to enjoy life equally as men do. Just take a look at the wrinkles on the faces of your mother and wife and hoary hair as well. They could have been more beautiful and stylish but for years of hard work as a mother of three or four.

  Secondly, it's better for children to be brought up in group instead of individually. For instance, those children brought up in group will be excellent in social activities and are naturally good at getting along with others. In addition, the professional staff who have years of nursing education can take better care of the children by contract with their young parents lack of experience.

  To sum up, this is surely a long-sighted policy. Not only women but also children are its beneficiaries. And perhaps the great contribution of it is the spirit of equality between sexes we encourage. (320 words)

  最后,宁波朗阁给大家几个小的提示——拿7分的关键是:

  1)结构清晰,不累赘,思路不杂揉,outline能联系到经典大主题思路

  2)题型审题正确,按照要求写作,字数在280左右

  3)卷面清楚,基本没有涂改的地方,修改用橡皮才清楚

  4)从句在5句以上,语法错误低于3个

  5)词汇变化基本达到大学六级水平(6000词左右),重复词汇不超过1遍

  6)观点有一定的新意,在时间允许的情况写个个性小段落

  7)开头结尾事先准备过,并采用自己准备的杀手锏。

  重点要强调的是要多注重积累,滴水穿石。这可不是老生常谈,这边要给大家提两点具体的要求:第一,养成每天阅读英文报刊文章半小时的习惯,提前对社会上探讨的核心问题和观点倾向有所了解,清楚西方人表达观点的方式。第二,勤练笔,有写必改。建议找老师或者英语水平较高的同学和朋友帮你修改!


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